NARRATIVE

I went to Hawaii on holiday, with my family. I stayed a hotel near the beach.
On the first day in the morning, we went to visit the island. Hawaii is so beautiful! At  the time to have dinner we went to a restaurant of ocean fish and we met.
Later we went to the hotel and stayed at the swimming pool.
The second day,wewent to the beach and have dinner there, but aprox at 5 or 6 pm it started to make bad day, we went to the hotel and stayed there went we arrived,a tornado started.
We stayed at the hotel very scared  because the tornado had broken big part of them.
When all finished, we went out and the streets, houses,all was broken, 10.000 people died.
In the next morning we took the tikets and went to Spain.